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I've never been good with words I won't build you a castle with broken phrases and incomplete sentences, I couldn't defend your honor with an unsure voice and trembling lips I can't make flowers bloom with clumsy confessions of love and the moon will never weep over my attempts at romance I'm afraid I'll never be able to look you in the eye and declare my undying devotion for you to the world I've never been good with words But with my hands I could construct a grand mansion, and offer you comfort and security with my gentle caresses I'll plant flowers in your garden that will grow to be magnificent, while the sun and rain gives them sustenance My kisses would allow you to see the stars, the universe clinging to every sweet gasp that slips through your soft lips I won't be the one to write you poems and sing your praises, but with my actions I will convey exactly how I feel, I'll let everyone know just how much you mean to me
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Jun 24, 2017
Jun 24, 2017 at 11:25 PM UTC
feel my thoughts
I've never been good with words I won't build you a castle with broken phrases and incomplete sentences, I couldn't defend your honor with an unsure voice and trembling lips I can't make flowers bloom with clumsy confessions of love and the moon will never weep over my attempts at romance I'm afraid I'll never be able to look you in the eye and declare my undying devotion for you to the world I've never been good with words But with my hands I could construct a grand mansion, and offer you comfort and security with my gentle caresses I'll plant flowers in your garden that will grow to be magnificent, while the sun and rain gives them sustenance My kisses would allow you to see the stars, the universe clinging to every sweet gasp that slips through your soft lips I won't be the one to write you poems and sing your praises, but with my actions I will convey exactly how I feel, I'll let everyone know just how much you mean to me
This piece has been trying to claw its way out of me for a while now, its kind of sloppy, but I love it. Not everything I write will be great and I'm fine with that. Anyway, I hope you all like it, and please give me some feedback
Latri
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Jun 24, 2017
Jun 24, 2017 at 11:25 PM UTC
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