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All we are, delightfully lost. Is that all it is? Heading feet-first into sunsets. Whirlwinds. We crash, grab, forget to blink, rely on breath alone. Here words tumble in a torrent, recycle in your mouth and back out again. Clichés cannot die. On a loop, a worn-down yo-yo. I roll them out for you on a goldenrod carpet, you skip across them as though they are red-hot coals. What set you off like a sparkler in the night? The sea brings us love, vice versa. Waves like mounds of sugar embrace your torso in a way I can only dream of. Camera exhausted under the weight of today, puddles of polaroids, enough to smother the floor. I smell snapdragons, candy fizzing on both of our tongues. Soaked. Fade to black. Your language is blossom slinking into my ears. Wet sand slips in a mustard waterfall through our fingers and I trip over my T’s and P’s. I’ll keep your smile locked in my pocket for black-cloud days. A triplet of cartwheels, sticky palms and panting as if you’ve run a marathon. Give it a go… I try and collapse, a soppy sprawled mess gawping at the sky, before blue eyes smash into mine and I fall again. Dripping. In-between seconds. Flaccid strands of hair, frizzled spaghetti clings to your neck. The blonde grenade I keep writing, cannot control but adore to see explode, catch the thirteen or more little fragments of you, keep them ‘til next time. When you leave I can follow your footprints, mementos back home, tread where you stood and exuded light. We sit cross-legged, water dribbling over our toes. I memorise your heartbeat, you plonk your head on my shoulder. Minutes wash away. Stop the clock.
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Sep 12, 2014
Sep 12, 2014 at 11:34 AM UTC
You, The Sea & Me
All we are, delightfully lost. Is that all it is? Heading feet-first into sunsets. Whirlwinds. We crash, grab, forget to blink, rely on breath alone. Here words tumble in a torrent, recycle in your mouth and back out again. Clichés cannot die. On a loop, a worn-down yo-yo. I roll them out for you on a goldenrod carpet, you skip across them as though they are red-hot coals. What set you off like a sparkler in the night? The sea brings us love, vice versa. Waves like mounds of sugar embrace your torso in a way I can only dream of. Camera exhausted under the weight of today, puddles of polaroids, enough to smother the floor. I smell snapdragons, candy fizzing on both of our tongues. Soaked. Fade to black. Your language is blossom slinking into my ears. Wet sand slips in a mustard waterfall through our fingers and I trip over my T’s and P’s. I’ll keep your smile locked in my pocket for black-cloud days. A triplet of cartwheels, sticky palms and panting as if you’ve run a marathon. Give it a go… I try and collapse, a soppy sprawled mess gawping at the sky, before blue eyes smash into mine and I fall again. Dripping. In-between seconds. Flaccid strands of hair, frizzled spaghetti clings to your neck. The blonde grenade I keep writing, cannot control but adore to see explode, catch the thirteen or more little fragments of you, keep them ‘til next time. When you leave I can follow your footprints, mementos back home, tread where you stood and exuded light. We sit cross-legged, water dribbling over our toes. I memorise your heartbeat, you plonk your head on my shoulder. Minutes wash away. Stop the clock.
Written: September 2014. Explanation: A poem written in my own time over the course of four days, part of my dream couple beach/sea series. Out of all the poems I have written, this is the one I am most proud of, although it is similar to other poems in the same series. It is very easy for me to visualise the beach, the couple and the sand etc. A few pictures and a video online inspired the piece. There may be very slight edits in the near future. Feedback greatly appreciated and always welcome.
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Sep 12, 2014
Sep 12, 2014 at 11:34 AM UTC
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