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To toast the official opening Of our village Millennium Green Twelve of us went on a journey To see sights we’d never seen. With a degree of apprehension We were all of one accord With an enormous basket that was attached To a hot-air balloon we all got on board. Whooshhh was the noise from the burner As the pilot lifted up off the ground But then as we rose up much higher It was done with nary a sound. Slowly we drifted Westwards Then moving slightly to the South A dozen brave souls in a basket Gazed at landscapes with open mouth. Stafford Castle was down below us Then the motorway passed by too We soon headed away from Stafford Then Cannock Chase came into view. We spotted some fallow deer grazing Some of them sitting as if to retire Then the pilot again fired the burner And lifted the basket much higher. Finally we reached the maximum height That we were allowed to reach Four thousand four hundred and eighty feet A specific height that our balloon couldn't breech. It was then that I saw with amazement While the evening sun shone at our side A passenger liner flew up through the clouds It was a beautiful sight which no-one denied. And did I get such a fabulous picture Well of course not, I was too much in awe By the time I had swung round my camera A tailplane and the sight was no more. We were coming to the end of our journey I thought seeing the plane was the peak But then we saw Lichfield Cathedral With its three spires that make it unique. The experience will always stay with me Of an evening with a view from above As we floated about in the heavens Over countryside in the county I love. ©Joe Wilson – A View from Above 2014 ‘August 2000 on a Friday evening in glorious sunshine, the balloon lying in a heap on Derrington Millennium Green in Staffordshire, UK, gradually began to fill with air as the pilot and his assistant slowly pulled at it to allow air into all the creases. Suddenly it stood up and drifted up into the air, though it was still tethered in four places to the ground. I had no idea they were so big or so tall.’ ©Joe Wilson 2014
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Apr 14, 2014
Apr 14, 2014 at 3:27 PM UTC
A VIEW FROM ABOVE
To toast the official opening Of our village Millennium Green Twelve of us went on a journey To see sights we’d never seen. With a degree of apprehension We were all of one accord With an enormous basket that was attached To a hot-air balloon we all got on board. Whooshhh was the noise from the burner As the pilot lifted up off the ground But then as we rose up much higher It was done with nary a sound. Slowly we drifted Westwards Then moving slightly to the South A dozen brave souls in a basket Gazed at landscapes with open mouth. Stafford Castle was down below us Then the motorway passed by too We soon headed away from Stafford Then Cannock Chase came into view. We spotted some fallow deer grazing Some of them sitting as if to retire Then the pilot again fired the burner And lifted the basket much higher. Finally we reached the maximum height That we were allowed to reach Four thousand four hundred and eighty feet A specific height that our balloon couldn't breech. It was then that I saw with amazement While the evening sun shone at our side A passenger liner flew up through the clouds It was a beautiful sight which no-one denied. And did I get such a fabulous picture Well of course not, I was too much in awe By the time I had swung round my camera A tailplane and the sight was no more. We were coming to the end of our journey I thought seeing the plane was the peak But then we saw Lichfield Cathedral With its three spires that make it unique. The experience will always stay with me Of an evening with a view from above As we floated about in the heavens Over countryside in the county I love. ©Joe Wilson – A View from Above 2014 ‘August 2000 on a Friday evening in glorious sunshine, the balloon lying in a heap on Derrington Millennium Green in Staffordshire, UK, gradually began to fill with air as the pilot and his assistant slowly pulled at it to allow air into all the creases. Suddenly it stood up and drifted up into the air, though it was still tethered in four places to the ground. I had no idea they were so big or so tall.’ ©Joe Wilson 2014
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Apr 14, 2014
Apr 14, 2014 at 3:27 PM UTC
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