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I put my trust Yet I get betrayed The ones closest to me Why does it turn to hate I care deeply I try to be fair Yet somehow all of it goes in vain To stop it I made myself of clay I remodel it everyday But one day it all melts I explain so it helps My true self never sells I hide myself from the world But my heart dulls My emotions stay My actions sway When I lay I ask whose fault is it each day I try so hard I ignore myself even though it hurts like a shard They don’t understand God knows if I even do But I try to change For people’s benefit I stay Who do I blame Me or them ? It’s suffocating Trapping myself to stay sane Laughing and calling myself lame Craving the feeling Again I remodel the clay I search for faults within myself yet the answers never convince me the love I so deeply crave somehow escapes me and when it finally appears it’s always too late sometimes I wonder what would have changed if I had stayed Sometimes I see the fault in them Only if they had stayed I only ask for a moment A chance to explain But they are too closed Unwilling to care I get angry Why don’t they understand ? It’s stupid to think I’m always wrong If I accept their flaws Why can’t they ? So I start again remodel the clay wet with rain it’s never the same the original design buried in the layers I fill the cracks and polish them smooth yet somewhere beneath the surface the first shape still remains. -nilaysingh
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Mar 7
Mar 7, 2026 at 12:06 PM UTC
The First Shape
I put my trust Yet I get betrayed The ones closest to me Why does it turn to hate I care deeply I try to be fair Yet somehow all of it goes in vain To stop it I made myself of clay I remodel it everyday But one day it all melts I explain so it helps My true self never sells I hide myself from the world But my heart dulls My emotions stay My actions sway When I lay I ask whose fault is it each day I try so hard I ignore myself even though it hurts like a shard They don’t understand God knows if I even do But I try to change For people’s benefit I stay Who do I blame Me or them ? It’s suffocating Trapping myself to stay sane Laughing and calling myself lame Craving the feeling Again I remodel the clay I search for faults within myself yet the answers never convince me the love I so deeply crave somehow escapes me and when it finally appears it’s always too late sometimes I wonder what would have changed if I had stayed Sometimes I see the fault in them Only if they had stayed I only ask for a moment A chance to explain But they are too closed Unwilling to care I get angry Why don’t they understand ? It’s stupid to think I’m always wrong If I accept their flaws Why can’t they ? So I start again remodel the clay wet with rain it’s never the same the original design buried in the layers I fill the cracks and polish them smooth yet somewhere beneath the surface the first shape still remains. -nilaysingh
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19/M/India
Mar 7
Mar 7, 2026 at 12:06 PM UTC
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