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The clouds move slowly in their cruise along the sky, gentle hues of yellow seeping through the cracks and crevices. I open the jar, in which lies an ant— suspended through time, encased in the beckoning dunes of sweetness which caused its own demise. is it really possible to die of sweetness? I look up the sky, the very same vast expanse of sugary white and blue and yellow trusted by countless men to their own demise. perhaps too much sweetness is poisonous. consume responsibly.
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Feb 16, 2019
Feb 16, 2019 at 9:13 PM UTC
Saccharine Deceit
The clouds move slowly in their cruise along the sky, gentle hues of yellow seeping through the cracks and crevices. I open the jar, in which lies an ant— suspended through time, encased in the beckoning dunes of sweetness which caused its own demise. is it really possible to die of sweetness? I look up the sky, the very same vast expanse of sugary white and blue and yellow trusted by countless men to their own demise. perhaps too much sweetness is poisonous. consume responsibly.
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17/F/Philippines
Feb 16, 2019
Feb 16, 2019 at 9:13 PM UTC
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