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Darkness creeps up on me. It sneeks up like a theif Waiting for me to turn my back to danger. It pauses in an alleyway as I pass it by All of a sudden, it POUNCES! I am smothered There is no way out and this deep pit of oblivion has got me in its clutches and it won't let me go. I struggle, but I'm in a net the more I move, the tighter the hold. I stop struggling, but it keeps getting tighter. My breath is gasping in my throat. I need air... I am drowning.... Finally the darkness wins And I am dragged into Oblivion's murky depths Internally raging And I can't stop screaming....
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Aug 24, 2010
Aug 24, 2010 at 8:37 AM UTC
Oblivion's Murky Depths
Darkness creeps up on me. It sneeks up like a theif Waiting for me to turn my back to danger. It pauses in an alleyway as I pass it by All of a sudden, it POUNCES! I am smothered There is no way out and this deep pit of oblivion has got me in its clutches and it won't let me go. I struggle, but I'm in a net the more I move, the tighter the hold. I stop struggling, but it keeps getting tighter. My breath is gasping in my throat. I need air... I am drowning.... Finally the darkness wins And I am dragged into Oblivion's murky depths Internally raging And I can't stop screaming....
(c) Hollie Turner
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Aug 24, 2010
Aug 24, 2010 at 8:37 AM UTC
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