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Fantasy.  Take a second look.  This is literally one angle on the only fiance I've ever had.  No joke.  Mebbe see the sonnet titled "why did you hafta die?" next? (sonnet # DCCCXXV) We skidded round the corner and the p'lice Were in our face.  "Oh boy, we're out of space Babe--just be brave, we're gonna win.  Disgrace Will keep them on our case 'til we decrease Those ********  'Til they skulk and beg for peace. Now hang on tight"--(shifts in reverse)--"and brace Yourself"--(tires squealing loudly)--"we'll retrace-- It might be hard--hold on--don't drop your piece!" We ducked our heads, careening blythely through A blockade, sending cars flying everywhere. Out on the open road 'gain finally, too Alert to miss a beat--"Get ready!  Ere You see them--fire!  This is our rendezvous--" We won at six.  He's now their head.  Take care. 05May12 D185c
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Mar 28, 2017
Mar 28, 2017 at 11:04 PM UTC
6AM...the Wilder Version.
Fantasy.  Take a second look.  This is literally one angle on the only fiance I've ever had.  No joke.  Mebbe see the sonnet titled "why did you hafta die?" next? (sonnet # DCCCXXV) We skidded round the corner and the p'lice Were in our face.  "Oh boy, we're out of space Babe--just be brave, we're gonna win.  Disgrace Will keep them on our case 'til we decrease Those ********  'Til they skulk and beg for peace. Now hang on tight"--(shifts in reverse)--"and brace Yourself"--(tires squealing loudly)--"we'll retrace-- It might be hard--hold on--don't drop your piece!" We ducked our heads, careening blythely through A blockade, sending cars flying everywhere. Out on the open road 'gain finally, too Alert to miss a beat--"Get ready!  Ere You see them--fire!  This is our rendezvous--" We won at six.  He's now their head.  Take care. 05May12 D185c
*Original intro:  Jesse (a friend and fellow online poet at the since extinct Poetfreak.com)'s comment on "At 6AM...on Saturday" (the sonnets immediately preceding this number) prompted this. [pure fantasy]  Obviously I can't get Hollywood to hire me. But it was jolly good fun to write.
JennyGordon
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Mar 28, 2017
Mar 28, 2017 at 11:04 PM UTC
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