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1)  MORNIN lake glass-still/somewhere a loon is calling; coffee smells spiralling upstairs. my bed (piled mattresses/wood floor) is warm & the little birds trill in the frontyard by the dodge while in the woods foxes/are wakin' up. 2)  EVENIN [dock beers] . . . on the water shadflies squirm, ignorant & simple & doomed. jackfish tack lazily up and gobble --taking their meals. heron stands in the shallows and from downlake the wind blows sweetly/and in my head i hear girls singing.
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Sep 27, 2011
Sep 27, 2011 at 3:59 PM UTC
snow lake summer zen (forest girls)
1)  MORNIN lake glass-still/somewhere a loon is calling; coffee smells spiralling upstairs. my bed (piled mattresses/wood floor) is warm & the little birds trill in the frontyard by the dodge while in the woods foxes/are wakin' up. 2)  EVENIN [dock beers] . . . on the water shadflies squirm, ignorant & simple & doomed. jackfish tack lazily up and gobble --taking their meals. heron stands in the shallows and from downlake the wind blows sweetly/and in my head i hear girls singing.
snow lake is a lonely place to think of girls/but you learn to keep busy (open your eyes)
alloyddavies
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32/M/Canadian
Sep 27, 2011
Sep 27, 2011 at 3:59 PM UTC
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