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If shallow lakes hold your beauty in their waters, I do not care to break their stilling surface, Water lilies and reeds of wild grass do not tempt, Because where do I find more, once the image falters With little more than a gaze at the lilies? Their grace, On the surface, is all they can give for an attempt. In shallow lakes, I can see their bottom is nigh, So to swim is not feasible, nor delightful; To merely wade in a shallow pond — uninspiring! Alas, to surface from deepest parts yields but a sigh, And if waters here were to drink, it would not fill my soul, Still beautiful to gaze upon, but after little time is tiring. So I indulge myself in the vastness of the sea, The depths are endless, and the storms are foul, But in the ocean deep, when I start swimming far, The waters are an infinite sea of fantasy, To be swallowed whole within the temptest’s howl; The deepest depths will heal the deepest scar.
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Aug 15, 2014
Aug 15, 2014 at 7:44 PM UTC
Shallow Lakes
If shallow lakes hold your beauty in their waters, I do not care to break their stilling surface, Water lilies and reeds of wild grass do not tempt, Because where do I find more, once the image falters With little more than a gaze at the lilies? Their grace, On the surface, is all they can give for an attempt. In shallow lakes, I can see their bottom is nigh, So to swim is not feasible, nor delightful; To merely wade in a shallow pond — uninspiring! Alas, to surface from deepest parts yields but a sigh, And if waters here were to drink, it would not fill my soul, Still beautiful to gaze upon, but after little time is tiring. So I indulge myself in the vastness of the sea, The depths are endless, and the storms are foul, But in the ocean deep, when I start swimming far, The waters are an infinite sea of fantasy, To be swallowed whole within the temptest’s howl; The deepest depths will heal the deepest scar.
I'm not looking for some shallow lake; I'm looking for a deep ocean to get lost in.
david-leger
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21/M/Canadian
Aug 15, 2014
Aug 15, 2014 at 7:44 PM UTC
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