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Let's taste the ocean water together  just you and I we will dive into the deep blue sea  holding hands til our heads are just floating on top  riding with the waves  and let's dive in even further after that  until we're kissing the ocean bottom  gulping in copious amounts of sea salt and shrimp brine  lets just dive in  dive in  dive in  and sink with the mollusks and octopi  give up on living this sham we call a life  cloistered in our clam shells we don't have a room with a view  always protecting our pearls from those that are out to poach us for our inner treasures  remember all the gold memories we've collected in our troves  like we were hoarding them away for some rainy day  well it doesnt get any rainier than drowning in these murky depths  we're like treasure chests sinking to the bottom fast  lost from some forgotten shipwreck  we're collecting on the ocean floor waiting to be discovered  over centuries we'll rust and be covered in barnacles before we're found  Crumbling in the hands of those that try to rescue us  lets just give up  give up  give up  but we can't give up  Not yet anyway Not while we're treading these waves with sharks lapping hungrily at our feet  With rows of ravenous razor sharp teeth savoring the slow taste of our defeat as we inch closer  And closer With our heads fighting to stay above water til we can no longer tread with these useless arms and legs we take that last gasp of treasured breath into our lungs  and feel the water pressure collapse around our tired bodies feeling the ache of our worn out limbs  we sink and we sink  We sink We sink to the bottom of where we started  filling our deflated hearts with all the failed dreams and squandered hopes of all the shipwrecked treasures that came before us  And all those that join us sooner or later on these murky endless bottoms We've been here before And we're all destined to be here again And again And again  So let's just keep treading these waves for as long as we can Maybe we'll luck out and find an island in all this oceanic bliss We'll crawl on shore  Grasping for dry sand and a warm place to hole up in Before we find ourselves back out Lost in the sea Treading water With sharks licking hungrily at our feet  With rows of ravenous razor sharp teeth Savoring the slow taste of our defeat
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Sep 29, 2012
Sep 29, 2012 at 1:33 AM UTC
Treading Water With Sharks (the endless drowning of our treasured youth)
Let's taste the ocean water together  just you and I we will dive into the deep blue sea  holding hands til our heads are just floating on top  riding with the waves  and let's dive in even further after that  until we're kissing the ocean bottom  gulping in copious amounts of sea salt and shrimp brine  lets just dive in  dive in  dive in  and sink with the mollusks and octopi  give up on living this sham we call a life  cloistered in our clam shells we don't have a room with a view  always protecting our pearls from those that are out to poach us for our inner treasures  remember all the gold memories we've collected in our troves  like we were hoarding them away for some rainy day  well it doesnt get any rainier than drowning in these murky depths  we're like treasure chests sinking to the bottom fast  lost from some forgotten shipwreck  we're collecting on the ocean floor waiting to be discovered  over centuries we'll rust and be covered in barnacles before we're found  Crumbling in the hands of those that try to rescue us  lets just give up  give up  give up  but we can't give up  Not yet anyway Not while we're treading these waves with sharks lapping hungrily at our feet  With rows of ravenous razor sharp teeth savoring the slow taste of our defeat as we inch closer  And closer With our heads fighting to stay above water til we can no longer tread with these useless arms and legs we take that last gasp of treasured breath into our lungs  and feel the water pressure collapse around our tired bodies feeling the ache of our worn out limbs  we sink and we sink  We sink We sink to the bottom of where we started  filling our deflated hearts with all the failed dreams and squandered hopes of all the shipwrecked treasures that came before us  And all those that join us sooner or later on these murky endless bottoms We've been here before And we're all destined to be here again And again And again  So let's just keep treading these waves for as long as we can Maybe we'll luck out and find an island in all this oceanic bliss We'll crawl on shore  Grasping for dry sand and a warm place to hole up in Before we find ourselves back out Lost in the sea Treading water With sharks licking hungrily at our feet  With rows of ravenous razor sharp teeth Savoring the slow taste of our defeat
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Sep 29, 2012
Sep 29, 2012 at 1:33 AM UTC
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