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We dated, it was weird, I could tell something was wrong. You said goodbye, I did too, and I felt so confused. I didn't mean to not feel, you just weren't the one, then sometime we started talking again. And then I found out why. You began by saying you had a secret, a deep, dark one that no one could know. And for hours you tested me, made me swear to never tell. Then you said it. And everything made sense. And now look at you, opening up to the world around you, looking at the hopes I have for you, I am proud of you. I am proud of you. I am proud of you. You have so far to go, but you've come so far already. I love you, but platonically, like a brother, the one that I never had to look up to. So thank you, and remember, I love you and I'm proud of you, so very proud.
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Sep 29, 2014
Sep 29, 2014 at 11:20 PM UTC
I'm Proud of You
We dated, it was weird, I could tell something was wrong. You said goodbye, I did too, and I felt so confused. I didn't mean to not feel, you just weren't the one, then sometime we started talking again. And then I found out why. You began by saying you had a secret, a deep, dark one that no one could know. And for hours you tested me, made me swear to never tell. Then you said it. And everything made sense. And now look at you, opening up to the world around you, looking at the hopes I have for you, I am proud of you. I am proud of you. I am proud of you. You have so far to go, but you've come so far already. I love you, but platonically, like a brother, the one that I never had to look up to. So thank you, and remember, I love you and I'm proud of you, so very proud.
To a dear friend and all that he has gone through in the past two years, thanks for being there when I needed a shoulder and thanks for everything you've taught me about life.
Starlithe
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27/Non-binary
Sep 29, 2014
Sep 29, 2014 at 11:20 PM UTC
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