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She sent a package tied in this biege tweed cord. It turned out to be a picture of you two at the lake, that day it was cold and she wore that beanie with the flames, her hair all curly and escaping, your lips all red and chapped. A folded note tucked on the inside of the frame reads: "I have Connie, **** you Love always, smiley-face, smiley-face smiley-face, smiley-face, me." Connie: your/her rat terrier. You put the picture in its black frame on the tv table. The tweed you nail to two spaced planks on the wall above the tv. It's like abstract modernist-expressionist- constructionist-art. It's just one string. A taut cord of brown tweed. The black night comes, over and over, over and over, she doesn't return, but the tweed remains as taut as a fingernail or an exposed artery. Somehow it's so human and obstinate that the woven vertebrae seems to curve minutely and femininely. As time passes, the tweed moves from beige to golden and gravitational. A call to a friend goes something like this: "Come over here, I've got this amazing thing on my wall." The friend, Eric, calls more friends. The friends come over, all piling around this golden tweed after they've taken stock of the kitchen and Wild Turkey. They take turns plucking it, thumbing it, putting their ears to it, and studying it, all at your insistence. Somebody, ******* Eric, coughs in the room. More people begin to cough. Eric walks up to the the string, that is nailed at top and bottom on two spaced planks. Eric gives it a final hard tug, snapping it like a belt. the tweed hums and shivers off a few flakes of dust and amber material. "I've just wasted five minutes with this thing," Eric says to the string, and you. Eric speaks for the group. He turns and leaves, taking the whole group of twenty with him. They trail behind Eric like a great, long tail flicking and knocking things over in your apartment out of sheer agitation on the way out. The golden gravity subsumes you. You do not close the door behind them, you can't even hear their tiny, black voices as they all clamor into the elevator and ding.
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Nov 19, 2011
Nov 19, 2011 at 11:30 PM UTC
Why do we ever tell our friends about the people we love?
She sent a package tied in this biege tweed cord. It turned out to be a picture of you two at the lake, that day it was cold and she wore that beanie with the flames, her hair all curly and escaping, your lips all red and chapped. A folded note tucked on the inside of the frame reads: "I have Connie, **** you Love always, smiley-face, smiley-face smiley-face, smiley-face, me." Connie: your/her rat terrier. You put the picture in its black frame on the tv table. The tweed you nail to two spaced planks on the wall above the tv. It's like abstract modernist-expressionist- constructionist-art. It's just one string. A taut cord of brown tweed. The black night comes, over and over, over and over, she doesn't return, but the tweed remains as taut as a fingernail or an exposed artery. Somehow it's so human and obstinate that the woven vertebrae seems to curve minutely and femininely. As time passes, the tweed moves from beige to golden and gravitational. A call to a friend goes something like this: "Come over here, I've got this amazing thing on my wall." The friend, Eric, calls more friends. The friends come over, all piling around this golden tweed after they've taken stock of the kitchen and Wild Turkey. They take turns plucking it, thumbing it, putting their ears to it, and studying it, all at your insistence. Somebody, ******* Eric, coughs in the room. More people begin to cough. Eric walks up to the the string, that is nailed at top and bottom on two spaced planks. Eric gives it a final hard tug, snapping it like a belt. the tweed hums and shivers off a few flakes of dust and amber material. "I've just wasted five minutes with this thing," Eric says to the string, and you. Eric speaks for the group. He turns and leaves, taking the whole group of twenty with him. They trail behind Eric like a great, long tail flicking and knocking things over in your apartment out of sheer agitation on the way out. The golden gravity subsumes you. You do not close the door behind them, you can't even hear their tiny, black voices as they all clamor into the elevator and ding.
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Nov 19, 2011
Nov 19, 2011 at 11:30 PM UTC
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