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They started with the money. But they didn't stop there. They then took my house, furniture, car, work— they only left my clothes and my children. But they didn't stop there. They stripped off my dignity —no respectable fellow would talk to me— and my rights. Now, I've only got my children. My clothes have rotted and my name is forgotten. I am now a grain of sand from a desert lost in the countryside.
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Mar 24
Mar 24, 2026 at 11:02 AM UTC
Tingo
They started with the money. But they didn't stop there. They then took my house, furniture, car, work— they only left my clothes and my children. But they didn't stop there. They stripped off my dignity —no respectable fellow would talk to me— and my rights. Now, I've only got my children. My clothes have rotted and my name is forgotten. I am now a grain of sand from a desert lost in the countryside.
"Tingo" is a Pascuense word meaning "to extract or haul as much as possible" ------------ Copyright: Shattentraumer, 2026. Licensed under CC BY-NC-SA 4.0 (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-sa/4.0/). Original: https://hellopoetry.com/poems/5277041/tingo
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Mar 24, 2026 at 11:02 AM UTC
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