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Breaking down armor, bulldozing down walls accidentally, Of course it’s only right it happened at 3am in my car, rain down pouring, unsuspecting. The most vulnerable and raw glimpse of who you really are, A taste of your core; crying, crumbling, chest ripped wide open for me to see Your fiercely pounding heart; your blue-green eyes somehow more vibrant Against red, puffy skin; dark eyelashes clumping haphazardly, clinging against The storm raging inside of your soul, echoed by thunder on the highway; the quivering of your voice, your trembling hands, you surrender, displaying emotion so deep, more powerful than any song I’ve ever heard; a moment that took my breath away Like nothing has before.
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Jul 13, 2015
Jul 13, 2015 at 2:57 AM UTC
Your Most Beautiful Moment
Breaking down armor, bulldozing down walls accidentally, Of course it’s only right it happened at 3am in my car, rain down pouring, unsuspecting. The most vulnerable and raw glimpse of who you really are, A taste of your core; crying, crumbling, chest ripped wide open for me to see Your fiercely pounding heart; your blue-green eyes somehow more vibrant Against red, puffy skin; dark eyelashes clumping haphazardly, clinging against The storm raging inside of your soul, echoed by thunder on the highway; the quivering of your voice, your trembling hands, you surrender, displaying emotion so deep, more powerful than any song I’ve ever heard; a moment that took my breath away Like nothing has before.
christina-mccourt
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Jul 13, 2015
Jul 13, 2015 at 2:57 AM UTC
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