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~for Victoria~ *this by rights an easy poem to inscribe nonetheless the rhythm escapes me, though the wordy contra-shades of render and tender, some incontrovertible, all well understood, their complexity loved and jointed-in-a-soul, betrothing and forevermore rendering, separating two subtle words that shape e v e r y t h i n g about the this poet,  tender boy rendered man, by many lifetimes that fit into no storage shed(ing) yet this new effort requires effort, the verbs ripped wrenched, the nouns hide underneath profound, notions needed for a potent potion release; none, **** do not come easy so put aside for the spilling moment though the urgency of the needling in-chest, thumping, begging for release furiously, fulfilling the poets doublin purpose: created to create seeds only this a simplistic surrenders from self, to self emergent tender me the teary essence soup of human weakness from which to render strength   from that brew, give me beauty, the keen and the ken the crook and the hook to desire the next days creation render, tender me unto, its new chance for beauty* 6/2/18 11:30am down by the riverside Peconic
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Jun 2, 2018
Jun 2, 2018 at 11:57 AM UTC
render, tender me, beauty
~for Victoria~ *this by rights an easy poem to inscribe nonetheless the rhythm escapes me, though the wordy contra-shades of render and tender, some incontrovertible, all well understood, their complexity loved and jointed-in-a-soul, betrothing and forevermore rendering, separating two subtle words that shape e v e r y t h i n g about the this poet,  tender boy rendered man, by many lifetimes that fit into no storage shed(ing) yet this new effort requires effort, the verbs ripped wrenched, the nouns hide underneath profound, notions needed for a potent potion release; none, **** do not come easy so put aside for the spilling moment though the urgency of the needling in-chest, thumping, begging for release furiously, fulfilling the poets doublin purpose: created to create seeds only this a simplistic surrenders from self, to self emergent tender me the teary essence soup of human weakness from which to render strength   from that brew, give me beauty, the keen and the ken the crook and the hook to desire the next days creation render, tender me unto, its new chance for beauty* 6/2/18 11:30am down by the riverside Peconic
victoria › water and seeds Beautifully rendered by the one that tenders.
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99/M/NYC/Lippstadt/Kraków
Jun 2, 2018
Jun 2, 2018 at 11:57 AM UTC
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