You words tell of hurt and loss
But the way you write is so much more.
You fill hello poetry with your thoughts and concerns
You open up and leave yourself raw
Your writing is quite beautiful,
Never the same, never cliche, you write what's real to you
So I want to take this time to appreciate your words.
with a few words of mine as I try to sum up how awesome you and your poetry is.
In your poem Backwards I thought it was really clever how the story is told from the bottom. I hope you realise that you don't need to be fixed you are you, you are real and that should be good enough for everybody else.
In your poem Beyond Repair I love the short simple lines that make it all the more meaningful and I like how I think I can relate to how you were feeling when writing this.
To sum it all up you really bring colour to hello poetry with your poems and I hope you keep writing and that I will see you get better and better.
Dec 4, 2014
Dec 4, 2014 at 1:38 PM UTC
You words tell of hurt and loss
But the way you write is so much more.
You fill hello poetry with your thoughts and concerns
You open up and leave yourself raw
Your writing is quite beautiful,
Never the same, never cliche, you write what's real to you
So I want to take this time to appreciate your words.
with a few words of mine as I try to sum up how awesome you and your poetry is.
In your poem Backwards I thought it was really clever how the story is told from the bottom. I hope you realise that you don't need to be fixed you are you, you are real and that should be good enough for everybody else.
In your poem Beyond Repair I love the short simple lines that make it all the more meaningful and I like how I think I can relate to how you were feeling when writing this.
To sum it all up you really bring colour to hello poetry with your poems and I hope you keep writing and that I will see you get better and better.
Really everyone she's great look at her work :)
