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Jim’s younger sister Followed you everywhere and stood watching as you rode the old car around the field or whizzed around on their motorbike to the cheers and shouts from the fence Monica why don’t you go off and play Jim said yes said Pete her other brother go play with your dolls go take a run and jump she said and still stood watching you her eyes fixed on you like wasps on a jam jar I want to watch him ride she said and stood with her hands on her hips waiting until you stopped the bike and got off and wandered over to you and said I like the way you ride like how you sway and swerve on the bike and you smiled at her and took in her short stature her dark eyes her determined expression and as Pete rode off on the bike and Jim stood on the fence calling to him Monica put her hand in yours and said wish you were my brother I know you’d let me ride the bike or car and not tease me or bawl me out I guess I would let you ride the bike or car you said and sensed her small hand in yours her thumb rubbing against your skin but seeing as you’re not my brother she whispered maybe you could marry me one day and we could ride off into the sunset like they do in the movies in Jim’s old car yes sure maybe you said knowing inside that’d be a bridge too far.
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Jul 24, 2012
Jul 24, 2012 at 3:56 PM UTC
AFTER THE BIKE RIDE.
Jim’s younger sister Followed you everywhere and stood watching as you rode the old car around the field or whizzed around on their motorbike to the cheers and shouts from the fence Monica why don’t you go off and play Jim said yes said Pete her other brother go play with your dolls go take a run and jump she said and still stood watching you her eyes fixed on you like wasps on a jam jar I want to watch him ride she said and stood with her hands on her hips waiting until you stopped the bike and got off and wandered over to you and said I like the way you ride like how you sway and swerve on the bike and you smiled at her and took in her short stature her dark eyes her determined expression and as Pete rode off on the bike and Jim stood on the fence calling to him Monica put her hand in yours and said wish you were my brother I know you’d let me ride the bike or car and not tease me or bawl me out I guess I would let you ride the bike or car you said and sensed her small hand in yours her thumb rubbing against your skin but seeing as you’re not my brother she whispered maybe you could marry me one day and we could ride off into the sunset like they do in the movies in Jim’s old car yes sure maybe you said knowing inside that’d be a bridge too far.
terry-collett
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Jul 24, 2012
Jul 24, 2012 at 3:56 PM UTC
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