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Feminine to the core A beauty of flesh And if I said complex, I would understate her To her, that would be a crime You see her Comment on her beauty And do her no justice Youre only blinded She is the sun And you'll only stare Never suspect her depths She is more akin Feeling more as though the sea Roiling and unsettled Beautiful from a distance Upsetting on its surface She is the oak An inner strength Strongly rooted, deeply soiled And worried that it's not enough But well rooted for the storm Thickly bowed Heavy with fruit and leaf Straining for the sun Warmth of day Living for the nights Away from pests, and for peace Seeking solace in the stars Her eyes show the diamonds Faceted of light and clear So many sides, complexity An observer only drawn To what they can relate The diamonds find their strength Threaded by fractures But so unlike mineral shapes Her cracks make her stronger Building a completeness That is more whole Than any other Her inward sight Makes those strengths Invisible to her So she concentrates And becomes So much more She is special
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Oct 23, 2014
Oct 23, 2014 at 7:56 AM UTC
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Feminine to the core A beauty of flesh And if I said complex, I would understate her To her, that would be a crime You see her Comment on her beauty And do her no justice Youre only blinded She is the sun And you'll only stare Never suspect her depths She is more akin Feeling more as though the sea Roiling and unsettled Beautiful from a distance Upsetting on its surface She is the oak An inner strength Strongly rooted, deeply soiled And worried that it's not enough But well rooted for the storm Thickly bowed Heavy with fruit and leaf Straining for the sun Warmth of day Living for the nights Away from pests, and for peace Seeking solace in the stars Her eyes show the diamonds Faceted of light and clear So many sides, complexity An observer only drawn To what they can relate The diamonds find their strength Threaded by fractures But so unlike mineral shapes Her cracks make her stronger Building a completeness That is more whole Than any other Her inward sight Makes those strengths Invisible to her So she concentrates And becomes So much more She is special
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Oct 23, 2014
Oct 23, 2014 at 7:56 AM UTC
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