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As kids we were avid watchers every Saturday evening of the Sci-Fi series Doctor Who on the BBC The Doctor was a Time Traveller who travelled around in a thing called the Tardis which was a small police box (It probably would have housed a police telephone) The gimmick in the show was the police box was very small yet when you went inside It turned out to be a lot bigger inside having several levels It was meant to emphasize that the Doctor occupied a different dimension in time and space, something like that anyway. I was thinking one day that some of the things I write are very long, can be several pages long Most people live busy lives They don't want to be reading something that's long They want things short and to the point, something quick, something that hits them Bam! Bam! Bam! And then it's over So if you do write something long you really gotta hook the reader early on, draw them in and surprise them Give them something they'd get lost in Bring them on some incredible fantastic amazing journey Something they'd wish would never end, that'd keep on going and going...that'd go on forever So I was thinking my Tardis would be the opposite of the Doctor's it'd be big or large, long on the outside But when you'd go inside it'd be suddenly strangely small and compact It'd be like Alice in Wonderland You'd be plunged into this strange new world so different Where suddenly different rules would apply All your old familar bearings would now be meaningless/ useless...would no longer make any sense It'd be like taking a drug you'd quickly forget the length of the thing You'd be carried along as if lost in some trance or dream Glimpsing maybe a beauty here... an insight there... always feeling like there was some great secret tantalising near A place quite wondrous... magical ... You too would have defied time and space You'd have come close to approaching...touching... the eternal.
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Jan 2
Jan 2, 2026 at 3:49 PM UTC
Writing a poem like the Tardis in Doctor Who (Gateway to the Eternal)
As kids we were avid watchers every Saturday evening of the Sci-Fi series Doctor Who on the BBC The Doctor was a Time Traveller who travelled around in a thing called the Tardis which was a small police box (It probably would have housed a police telephone) The gimmick in the show was the police box was very small yet when you went inside It turned out to be a lot bigger inside having several levels It was meant to emphasize that the Doctor occupied a different dimension in time and space, something like that anyway. I was thinking one day that some of the things I write are very long, can be several pages long Most people live busy lives They don't want to be reading something that's long They want things short and to the point, something quick, something that hits them Bam! Bam! Bam! And then it's over So if you do write something long you really gotta hook the reader early on, draw them in and surprise them Give them something they'd get lost in Bring them on some incredible fantastic amazing journey Something they'd wish would never end, that'd keep on going and going...that'd go on forever So I was thinking my Tardis would be the opposite of the Doctor's it'd be big or large, long on the outside But when you'd go inside it'd be suddenly strangely small and compact It'd be like Alice in Wonderland You'd be plunged into this strange new world so different Where suddenly different rules would apply All your old familar bearings would now be meaningless/ useless...would no longer make any sense It'd be like taking a drug you'd quickly forget the length of the thing You'd be carried along as if lost in some trance or dream Glimpsing maybe a beauty here... an insight there... always feeling like there was some great secret tantalising near A place quite wondrous... magical ... You too would have defied time and space You'd have come close to approaching...touching... the eternal.
Don't know if this is scientifically accurate LoL. A bit of a fun idea.
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Jan 2
Jan 2, 2026 at 3:49 PM UTC
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