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3:23

I enter through the gate

Into the woods

There is death everywhere

This is roughly how it will go

You can make changes in another life

 

Loaded shotgun in hand

Not for any particular reason

Or because I am scared

It’s just because

I go back to the old saying

That my father instilled in me

 

“Never enter the woods, without a loaded gun.”

 

I continue. . .

 

                                                                                                                      Heavy footsteps in the dead leaves

 

There is something up ahead

That it is and what it is

I am not sure. . .

 

The ground is still wet

There was serious damage after that storm

Just like there is after every storm

 

                                                                                                                                                              Fog smoke

 

I've approached it now

The night was covered in red

Delicious blood red

 

The shells rattle together in my pocket

The only thing left with still connection

I hear something fall behind me, make that twice

 

Spider webs in my vision

 

Tire tracks on the ground; fresh, strange

 

Another spider web in my vision

It’s a wasteland down here. . .

I think I need a cigarette

Click, click inhale

Love it, die

 

Mosquito death

Nicotine buzz

If I stop now

I’ll die in the flood.

 

 

-Pause-

 

 

Shotgun blast; exit wound

The entry way is opened now

Come take a look inside he said

 

What’s next?

What’s around the bend?

Another fallen tree,

Or another empty me?

 

                                                                            Heavy footsteps in the leaves, heavy breathing underneath.

 

Another dark shadow

Another spider web in my view

I know that this ground is hallow

From all the memories of me and you.

 

The stone takes off now

It quickly rolls away

Just like you did,

and just like I am today.

 

                                                                          At the bottom of the hill I see the sunset in a whole new way.

 

No more grey skies

No more bland colours

Only the singing blue jay

Only the beautiful day

 

I'll see you again

On the fifth of May.

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andrew-mcelroy
30 / M / Australian
Published
Nov 4, 2012
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