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this is the ship that hears the horn blow and seeks the brightest beacon of light her port of call, that sheltered harbor on stormy dark and windswept night my ship will break upon the rocks with no steady compass in hand ride the mystic waves with me, we can sound the depths of the ocean let us plunge our line into the fathomless love in that oneness, find our measure then sail on, sail on, into the deep
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Oct 18, 2011
Oct 18, 2011 at 3:01 PM UTC
sail on, sail on, into the deep
this is the ship that hears the horn blow and seeks the brightest beacon of light her port of call, that sheltered harbor on stormy dark and windswept night my ship will break upon the rocks with no steady compass in hand ride the mystic waves with me, we can sound the depths of the ocean let us plunge our line into the fathomless love in that oneness, find our measure then sail on, sail on, into the deep
i've been struggling with this one all morning.  cutting, adding, revising.  any feedback is appreciated.  :-)
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Oct 18, 2011
Oct 18, 2011 at 3:01 PM UTC
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