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it lurks in a whisper in the biting of cold breeze it is tauntingly hollow and fills me with unease creeping, crawling, undetected because of it's sly nature sometimes i can make it go, but it only comes back later voices screaming in my head "you're nothing" and it's true... you'll never ever understand because it hasn't happened to you it will not be much longer i soon will be at ease but the stinging pain will persevere in the biting of cold breeze.
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Feb 19, 2014
Feb 19, 2014 at 3:55 PM UTC
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it lurks in a whisper in the biting of cold breeze it is tauntingly hollow and fills me with unease creeping, crawling, undetected because of it's sly nature sometimes i can make it go, but it only comes back later voices screaming in my head "you're nothing" and it's true... you'll never ever understand because it hasn't happened to you it will not be much longer i soon will be at ease but the stinging pain will persevere in the biting of cold breeze.
Depression, voices in your head, hopelessness.
drvanatta
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Feb 19, 2014
Feb 19, 2014 at 3:55 PM UTC
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