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There is a girl I met today,

Who stood out among all others.

Straight as a I tight rope

I told her she was gorgeous.

She blushed, the warmth,

I almost melted.

What is going on?

How can this girl, only this girl,

Make me feel this way?

Still never will compare

To the love I am in now.

Yet her soul was too beautiful to surpass.

Her smile, her laugh, her clothing, her voice,

I want to keep them with me forever.

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Written by
frannyfoo
Published
Mar 16, 2013
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for the record, she told me i was also gorgeous and i gave her my name to add me on fb... she was perfect... tentatively awaiting that friend request. Made my day. <3

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