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Doronit would spit fire and Baruch knew it he'd had it before that time she'd gave him the hard time because he'd sat watching some dame in a caravan opposite hanging out washing on a make shift line fancy her do you? Doronit said why don't you go over and chat her up but Baruch told her he wasn't interested and that he was just observing the washing hanging process looking at her smalls I suppose? she said   no he said he hadn't but he had been looking at the fine movement of the dame's **** but he never told Doronit that yes she'd spit fire she'd lay the words on him and that time she saw this other dame's name in his note book and when he came home for lunch she said who's this then? you having it off with her? Baruch told her it was some dame he was watching at work all about security and such and she began throwing stuff at him shoes coat hangers knives forks and spoons whatever she could lay her hands on and some of it came down the stairs like missiles and he went up and pinned her down on the bed to calm her and she relaxed and said was that all? no affair? no he said no affair nothing just security at work and she smiled and kissed him and that was that all over fire spat and done but this time the fire would be for real and Baruch knew it and he watched her go about her work that day hoovering dusting cleaning the floor and he waved goodbye at the door and never looked back all over no more fire no more Doronit had done it for the last time and he recalled her that last moment she with her cigarette smoking her hair tied back her eyes full of dull fires burning embers and that is all looking back he remembers.
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Aug 7, 2013
Aug 7, 2013 at 2:34 AM UTC
SPITTING FIRES.
Doronit would spit fire and Baruch knew it he'd had it before that time she'd gave him the hard time because he'd sat watching some dame in a caravan opposite hanging out washing on a make shift line fancy her do you? Doronit said why don't you go over and chat her up but Baruch told her he wasn't interested and that he was just observing the washing hanging process looking at her smalls I suppose? she said   no he said he hadn't but he had been looking at the fine movement of the dame's **** but he never told Doronit that yes she'd spit fire she'd lay the words on him and that time she saw this other dame's name in his note book and when he came home for lunch she said who's this then? you having it off with her? Baruch told her it was some dame he was watching at work all about security and such and she began throwing stuff at him shoes coat hangers knives forks and spoons whatever she could lay her hands on and some of it came down the stairs like missiles and he went up and pinned her down on the bed to calm her and she relaxed and said was that all? no affair? no he said no affair nothing just security at work and she smiled and kissed him and that was that all over fire spat and done but this time the fire would be for real and Baruch knew it and he watched her go about her work that day hoovering dusting cleaning the floor and he waved goodbye at the door and never looked back all over no more fire no more Doronit had done it for the last time and he recalled her that last moment she with her cigarette smoking her hair tied back her eyes full of dull fires burning embers and that is all looking back he remembers.
terry-collett
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Aug 7, 2013
Aug 7, 2013 at 2:34 AM UTC
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