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“I have a story to tell.” said a woman, as she sat down amid the group of strangers. Nobody looked up, all too engrossed in their own knots of conversation. The woman, faced lined, hair lank and going grey, took a moment to gather herself, then cleared her throat and tried again. “I have a story to tell, it’s a ghost story!” That got through, there were all here, at this hotel with a reputation for being haunted for a ghost hunt. Almost en masse, they turned, a few seemed surprised, as if they had not realized someone was sitting there. She continued, now that she had their attention. “It’s not my story, it belongs to someone I met once, long ago.” She shook her head, thinking how odd is sounded to say something as intangible, as ephemeral as a story could belong to anyone. “She stayed here, a few years back, for one night, room 312.” There were some murmurs, room 312 was why there were here. The room where a woman took her life, after finding out her husband was cheating. The room that was the most active, in a very haunted hotel. She had them now, she knew it, their interest was piqued. Although the hotel tried to quiet the rumors, they still got out, and those that wanted to experience a haunted hotel always managed to find out. So, the week of Halloween, the management booked the hotel, with these ghost hunters. Year after year she saw them come, and year after year she told her story. “It was the year after the suicide, there had been a few sightings, but the room was still being rented.” All eyes were on her, they hung on her every word, a few still holding forgotten drinks, it their hands. “Her name was Rachael. She was heading to her hometown, to visit family, and stopped her for the night.” “She was tired, kept to herself, just checked in and went to bed.” A few people nodded, they knew how it was, traveling could be wearying. “Shortly after 2 a.m., she woke. A noise had disturbed her, a drip, drip, drip. Subtle but persistent. Heading into the bathroom, to see if a tap was dripping, she saw the ghost. It was in the bathtub, pale, still, floating in the ghostly remains of the ****** water she was found in. She fell back, nearly fainting her heart nearly beating out of her chest. She could not believe her eyes, it was not possible. But there it was, still lying there, she could even smell the moldy, rank smell of a decomposing body. And just where her horror had reached its peak, terror came to play. The ghost sat up, its translucent head slowly turning towards her, the eyes, closed permanently so long ago, opened, looked at her, froze her in place. With a squishy sound, the hand clenching the edge of the tub, released, pointed at her, and she heard the long dead voice, whisper her name. She fainted. When she came to, without a word to anyone, without taking time to pack her bags, she left the room, the hotel, possibly the state.” She sat back, waited, the others sat is stunned silence, they had been captivated. Finally, the spell broke, one by one they began to animate, chat among themselves. One person, more critical than the other posed a question. “If the woman left without a word, how did you come to hear her story?” At that point, behind the group, a waiter dropped a tray of glasses. The group turned, startled, and when they turned back, the storyteller had vanished, as if she had never been there at all.
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Nov 19, 2020
Nov 19, 2020 at 10:18 PM UTC
Ghost Story
“I have a story to tell.” said a woman, as she sat down amid the group of strangers. Nobody looked up, all too engrossed in their own knots of conversation. The woman, faced lined, hair lank and going grey, took a moment to gather herself, then cleared her throat and tried again. “I have a story to tell, it’s a ghost story!” That got through, there were all here, at this hotel with a reputation for being haunted for a ghost hunt. Almost en masse, they turned, a few seemed surprised, as if they had not realized someone was sitting there. She continued, now that she had their attention. “It’s not my story, it belongs to someone I met once, long ago.” She shook her head, thinking how odd is sounded to say something as intangible, as ephemeral as a story could belong to anyone. “She stayed here, a few years back, for one night, room 312.” There were some murmurs, room 312 was why there were here. The room where a woman took her life, after finding out her husband was cheating. The room that was the most active, in a very haunted hotel. She had them now, she knew it, their interest was piqued. Although the hotel tried to quiet the rumors, they still got out, and those that wanted to experience a haunted hotel always managed to find out. So, the week of Halloween, the management booked the hotel, with these ghost hunters. Year after year she saw them come, and year after year she told her story. “It was the year after the suicide, there had been a few sightings, but the room was still being rented.” All eyes were on her, they hung on her every word, a few still holding forgotten drinks, it their hands. “Her name was Rachael. She was heading to her hometown, to visit family, and stopped her for the night.” “She was tired, kept to herself, just checked in and went to bed.” A few people nodded, they knew how it was, traveling could be wearying. “Shortly after 2 a.m., she woke. A noise had disturbed her, a drip, drip, drip. Subtle but persistent. Heading into the bathroom, to see if a tap was dripping, she saw the ghost. It was in the bathtub, pale, still, floating in the ghostly remains of the ****** water she was found in. She fell back, nearly fainting her heart nearly beating out of her chest. She could not believe her eyes, it was not possible. But there it was, still lying there, she could even smell the moldy, rank smell of a decomposing body. And just where her horror had reached its peak, terror came to play. The ghost sat up, its translucent head slowly turning towards her, the eyes, closed permanently so long ago, opened, looked at her, froze her in place. With a squishy sound, the hand clenching the edge of the tub, released, pointed at her, and she heard the long dead voice, whisper her name. She fainted. When she came to, without a word to anyone, without taking time to pack her bags, she left the room, the hotel, possibly the state.” She sat back, waited, the others sat is stunned silence, they had been captivated. Finally, the spell broke, one by one they began to animate, chat among themselves. One person, more critical than the other posed a question. “If the woman left without a word, how did you come to hear her story?” At that point, behind the group, a waiter dropped a tray of glasses. The group turned, startled, and when they turned back, the storyteller had vanished, as if she had never been there at all.
More crap from my leaky mind.
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Nov 19, 2020
Nov 19, 2020 at 10:18 PM UTC
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