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Siren

I still hear the ocean

whenever I close my eyes.

 

"I love the beach," you said.

I looked at you then

with a grin on my face.

It wasn't intentional

but I used to make those

when you were near.

I guess it meant I'm happy,

or stupid enough to believe

what you say.

 

I still feel the sunset—

its glow, the overrated

orange skyline,

the melancholy it

wrapped us in.

A subtle reminder that the day

was about to die

and that it's so **** beautiful

when it does.

I told you this kept

my heart beating.

You were too quick

to agree.

 

Maybe that's why

you had to leave.

 

Maybe you liked

the sunrise more.

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Written by
hyun
Published
Dec 12, 2023
Lines·Words
28·117
Notes

a rewrite from one of my pieces back in 2016.

Tags
#ocean#siren#sunrise#sunset#love#beach
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