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for V, who commissioned me, Nay, Dared Me, sometime ago to write a ***** poem You know V? The one poet who wrote:          *The anxious tide within my head            was put there by the moon,            the ocean too, its waves of blue,            respond to what she says* Or           *The moon is alive and effeminate,             pulls on us, pushes on us,             at least on us who call her mother,             and though she shines her sweet shine             her soul is as cold and indifferent as             the belly of a black hole,             and we will war with her influence             all the days of our life.* well compared to that, writing something shat should be Easy well I'm sorta sure something can be found easy enough to fill the bill, such a command inherent demands careful consideration, a ***** poem, not easy to come by, every fiber resistant, but you judge, as you always do Option #1 **What makes a good poem? what makes me so succumbed to my own surety, my bold audacity to dare judge is simple rooted: slapped and gasped, verbal issuance of ooh's and aah's from eyes, my utter everything, teared and torn, cleansed and aroused, into a poetry world, this my one my house of worship, my real religion when I read good works, like those of the moon's misbegotten, Mr. V, then I am grounded, kneed in the groin of the head, and I thank god really, for gifting me the body prepared and ready to say I love those who love words with ready ease and let this be my simplest, cleanest, beloved tribute poem ever I writ, my claim to a PhD in poetry criticism** Option #2 I am mad cause I am sad my roller coaster ride brain is all ****** up don't  know why I am sad. it might be better by sharing how I am feeling in between texting my friends and ***** yes! gonna post those texts as my next terrific poem awesome, call it #asstag and gonna give it to my English Teqcher
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May 31, 2014
May 31, 2014 at 11:43 AM UTC
a commissioned ***** poem for the poet V (cleaning up my obligations)
for V, who commissioned me, Nay, Dared Me, sometime ago to write a ***** poem You know V? The one poet who wrote:          *The anxious tide within my head            was put there by the moon,            the ocean too, its waves of blue,            respond to what she says* Or           *The moon is alive and effeminate,             pulls on us, pushes on us,             at least on us who call her mother,             and though she shines her sweet shine             her soul is as cold and indifferent as             the belly of a black hole,             and we will war with her influence             all the days of our life.* well compared to that, writing something shat should be Easy well I'm sorta sure something can be found easy enough to fill the bill, such a command inherent demands careful consideration, a ***** poem, not easy to come by, every fiber resistant, but you judge, as you always do Option #1 **What makes a good poem? what makes me so succumbed to my own surety, my bold audacity to dare judge is simple rooted: slapped and gasped, verbal issuance of ooh's and aah's from eyes, my utter everything, teared and torn, cleansed and aroused, into a poetry world, this my one my house of worship, my real religion when I read good works, like those of the moon's misbegotten, Mr. V, then I am grounded, kneed in the groin of the head, and I thank god really, for gifting me the body prepared and ready to say I love those who love words with ready ease and let this be my simplest, cleanest, beloved tribute poem ever I writ, my claim to a PhD in poetry criticism** Option #2 I am mad cause I am sad my roller coaster ride brain is all ****** up don't  know why I am sad. it might be better by sharing how I am feeling in between texting my friends and ***** yes! gonna post those texts as my next terrific poem awesome, call it #asstag and gonna give it to my English Teqcher
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May 31, 2014
May 31, 2014 at 11:43 AM UTC
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