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"let's do it." says i one night "no no i daren't." (pronounced "durn't") says she *"m'father would be so angry.."* the next tuesday i say: "hey we should get together go wild and get into some shit--you might really like it!" she says "noo.. well, maybe sometime. b-but you can't let on to my sister! oh would she be jealous of it all." "mum's th'word" i says. "and you can't get her to do it instead!" she cautions. "s'alright. i like those mirrored freckles on your lip. she doesn't have those." "okay well i daren't do it now tho." a month later i say *"well do you wanna, donna?"* a sly smile then "how about a drink first?" so i buy us hennessy and we drink **** near the whole bottle and she, real drunk now says only "noo noo i daren't do it!!" (here bad timing chortles leerily at me with that "oh ohh ha ha ha ... ooops!!" shit-eating grin) while the bottle rolls round under the table. so i pass the year away with a few casual encounters and then she turns up some tuesday night on my porch with a moan sayin' "oh i wanna!" so of course i did it, twice, and she, while rubbing my belly after said: *"ohh. that really is nice!"* & so i did it once more for kicks ... holdin' her down on that big king bed. th'next week she comes in wearing new leather boots/hair curled/breasts overspilling she asks "have you ever seen la dolce vita?" while we're sweating away "yes." so she gushed *"oh but doesn't it show how beautiful it really is? the joining of two people so hot & sacred?"* "geez." says i, "so become a catholic already." she giggled ("you comedian!") and wanted to keep doing it again a few times but you know, i was quite serious.
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Nov 25, 2011
Nov 25, 2011 at 4:38 PM UTC
la vierge
"let's do it." says i one night "no no i daren't." (pronounced "durn't") says she *"m'father would be so angry.."* the next tuesday i say: "hey we should get together go wild and get into some shit--you might really like it!" she says "noo.. well, maybe sometime. b-but you can't let on to my sister! oh would she be jealous of it all." "mum's th'word" i says. "and you can't get her to do it instead!" she cautions. "s'alright. i like those mirrored freckles on your lip. she doesn't have those." "okay well i daren't do it now tho." a month later i say *"well do you wanna, donna?"* a sly smile then "how about a drink first?" so i buy us hennessy and we drink **** near the whole bottle and she, real drunk now says only "noo noo i daren't do it!!" (here bad timing chortles leerily at me with that "oh ohh ha ha ha ... ooops!!" shit-eating grin) while the bottle rolls round under the table. so i pass the year away with a few casual encounters and then she turns up some tuesday night on my porch with a moan sayin' "oh i wanna!" so of course i did it, twice, and she, while rubbing my belly after said: *"ohh. that really is nice!"* & so i did it once more for kicks ... holdin' her down on that big king bed. th'next week she comes in wearing new leather boots/hair curled/breasts overspilling she asks "have you ever seen la dolce vita?" while we're sweating away "yes." so she gushed *"oh but doesn't it show how beautiful it really is? the joining of two people so hot & sacred?"* "geez." says i, "so become a catholic already." she giggled ("you comedian!") and wanted to keep doing it again a few times but you know, i was quite serious.
odd daydream hashed into a meter which just flew into my head a couple days back. wouldn't leave til i put proper words to it.
alloyddavies
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Nov 25, 2011
Nov 25, 2011 at 4:38 PM UTC
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