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I sat on a park bench, Five meters away from you; I stared at you Several times but you never knew; You looked my way, And my heart almost went astray; Then you stood up, gaped, speechless, My eyes wandered around as my emotions became a mess; As the girl next to me walked down the park alley, I realized your gaze was fixed on her earnestly; My mind went blank, heart clenched with despair, I was no more than a girl sitting on a bench chair.
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Jan 25, 2018
Jan 25, 2018 at 1:35 PM UTC
"Girl on a Bench chair"
I sat on a park bench, Five meters away from you; I stared at you Several times but you never knew; You looked my way, And my heart almost went astray; Then you stood up, gaped, speechless, My eyes wandered around as my emotions became a mess; As the girl next to me walked down the park alley, I realized your gaze was fixed on her earnestly; My mind went blank, heart clenched with despair, I was no more than a girl sitting on a bench chair.
Hi guys! :D I'm really glad I became part of this poetry community. This is not the first poem I wrote in my 19 years of existence, but I only got interested in composing poems just recently (yesterday to be exact xD) after reading my friend's work of art. I will be really glad to hear your comments, opinions, and suggestions regarding this poem of mine, especially since I'm new to this field of art. Thank you everyone!! :D
Rika-chan
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19/F/Philippines
Jan 25, 2018
Jan 25, 2018 at 1:35 PM UTC
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