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I remember every metaphor I used for you. It’s beautiful how quickly I ran out. It was just so difficult to describe a forest at the bottom of an ocean on fire. You were soft, I was quiet. I remember every park bench, every broken sidewalk, every open sky. It was so whole. I remember breathing, and the lovely amount of effort it required. I hope you do too. They say writers remember the important things; I say they are liars. I remember you wore a purple flannel the first time I saw you, even though it isn’t your favorite colour. I remember that you take your coffee black, and your tea with plenty of honey. I remember the way your eyes changed colour based on the weather, and the way you looked at the sky, like it was endless. You were endless. I remember everything you taught me. They say writers remember the important things; I remember you.
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Jun 27, 2014
Jun 27, 2014 at 11:27 PM UTC
I’ll always remember you
I remember every metaphor I used for you. It’s beautiful how quickly I ran out. It was just so difficult to describe a forest at the bottom of an ocean on fire. You were soft, I was quiet. I remember every park bench, every broken sidewalk, every open sky. It was so whole. I remember breathing, and the lovely amount of effort it required. I hope you do too. They say writers remember the important things; I say they are liars. I remember you wore a purple flannel the first time I saw you, even though it isn’t your favorite colour. I remember that you take your coffee black, and your tea with plenty of honey. I remember the way your eyes changed colour based on the weather, and the way you looked at the sky, like it was endless. You were endless. I remember everything you taught me. They say writers remember the important things; I remember you.
christopher-evan
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Jun 27, 2014
Jun 27, 2014 at 11:27 PM UTC
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