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*Onward, soldier. Onward.* That’s what they all tell me, but let me slow down for a moment. There’s a little something I gotta say, Thank you. To that swing set in Greenhills Music Studio San Juan City, without you, I’d never have learned that sometimes it’s the other way around— feet in the sky and head on the ground. Mrs. Arambulo, the swing set’s owner, who made sure I was well versed in sonatinas and arpeggio scales before I found out they’d already made a piano that didn’t need tuning, and Ma, who’d test my memory by asking me if I could recite whole paragraphs at age four, she’s why I remember things like the smell of pilmeni, the color of our first house’s carpet, and nine page spoken word poetry, to everyone behind that old kids’ show, Bayani, watching it in my second grade HEKASI class would bring me to tears each time — no kidding, you all paved the way for my homeland’s history to make its home in my heart, my English teachers from sixth all the way to eleventh grade, who all believed and still believe in the words I put down on paper and spew out on dark stages armed with imagery and the Spirit, you made me fall deeper in love with the way words can be waves or flames, Dad, who taught me to climb mountains, to read books, to let myself run free among the nations but to always remember to leave a part of my heart at home, to the four little boys I met in Hong Kong, if we meet again, I owe you a better explanation to your question, “Why do you dance?” thank you for asking me that, and I’m sorry for my cowardly answer back then but I’m braver now, and I promise it’s for more than just fun or exercise, it’s for this God I hope you get to know, and to every Philippine history teacher I’ve ever had, keep teaching like that, we need more young ones who’d be willing to die for their homeland, you taught me that there is so much more to this country than its own people tell me, so burn on. and make sure they catch fire. *Onward, soldier. Onward.* I’m not sure where I’m headed, but I’d rather be uncertain of the road ahead than forget where I started. I’ve told you mine, now tell them yours.
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Nov 23, 2014
Nov 23, 2014 at 12:29 PM UTC
I'll Tell You Mine
*Onward, soldier. Onward.* That’s what they all tell me, but let me slow down for a moment. There’s a little something I gotta say, Thank you. To that swing set in Greenhills Music Studio San Juan City, without you, I’d never have learned that sometimes it’s the other way around— feet in the sky and head on the ground. Mrs. Arambulo, the swing set’s owner, who made sure I was well versed in sonatinas and arpeggio scales before I found out they’d already made a piano that didn’t need tuning, and Ma, who’d test my memory by asking me if I could recite whole paragraphs at age four, she’s why I remember things like the smell of pilmeni, the color of our first house’s carpet, and nine page spoken word poetry, to everyone behind that old kids’ show, Bayani, watching it in my second grade HEKASI class would bring me to tears each time — no kidding, you all paved the way for my homeland’s history to make its home in my heart, my English teachers from sixth all the way to eleventh grade, who all believed and still believe in the words I put down on paper and spew out on dark stages armed with imagery and the Spirit, you made me fall deeper in love with the way words can be waves or flames, Dad, who taught me to climb mountains, to read books, to let myself run free among the nations but to always remember to leave a part of my heart at home, to the four little boys I met in Hong Kong, if we meet again, I owe you a better explanation to your question, “Why do you dance?” thank you for asking me that, and I’m sorry for my cowardly answer back then but I’m braver now, and I promise it’s for more than just fun or exercise, it’s for this God I hope you get to know, and to every Philippine history teacher I’ve ever had, keep teaching like that, we need more young ones who’d be willing to die for their homeland, you taught me that there is so much more to this country than its own people tell me, so burn on. and make sure they catch fire. *Onward, soldier. Onward.* I’m not sure where I’m headed, but I’d rather be uncertain of the road ahead than forget where I started. I’ve told you mine, now tell them yours.
A poem I wrote for the #TellMeYours challenge. Video here! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IT8mUL8MZCw&feature;=youtu.be
sofia-paderes
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Nov 23, 2014
Nov 23, 2014 at 12:29 PM UTC
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