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pop pop pop as my breath reaches the surface my hair swirls around me free from the constraints of gravity my hands too and feet included there is no force to hold me down the world in which I inhabit can float away like on the tide but I cannot breath here my lungs fill with carbon dioxide soon I must return to the shore
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Mar 18, 2012
Mar 18, 2012 at 8:22 PM UTC
Under Water
pop pop pop as my breath reaches the surface my hair swirls around me free from the constraints of gravity my hands too and feet included there is no force to hold me down the world in which I inhabit can float away like on the tide but I cannot breath here my lungs fill with carbon dioxide soon I must return to the shore
kelly-c-s
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Mar 18, 2012
Mar 18, 2012 at 8:22 PM UTC
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