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A creature came.

A creature came and she took your name

and strewn it out across the lane

and said- "how does it feel to breath again?"

 

And her question caught you so off guard

that you felt the last acrylic shard

release- from your chest.

 

Then she took your hand and she led you down

to the simple place of earth and sound

and told you- this is what you’ve missed.

 

And how in shock you felt  as you gazed around

at this lovely place of earth and sound

and feel- so mean inside.

 

So mean you thought that you had been

for leaving all your childhood grins

to wander- all of the grandeur unnoticed.

 

Then you felt the warmth on your skin

of the giant sun and angel-kin

of the light ones- those holy ghosts you’ve known.

 

And the creature- she smiles up at you,

and she knows- that you know what to do;

Just love- and cherish- everything.

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Written by
lacs
American
Published
Jan 27, 2011
Lines·Words
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Notes

An old song that I did some slight revision on.

Thank you for reading =).

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