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"Long Khan Province, 10 July 1969.                The contact report, it stated..."   I remember Raymond K at Woodside, Sitting on the bed next to mine. He was sewing buttons on a shirt and wincing At my ***** ribald, song. It was not so much my singing (which was loud) But the stupid, foul profanity which he hated. Nowadays, I think I've changed but Ray hasn't; Ray can't, he's dead. And you will never, ever put to right that wrong, But needs must carry it forever, With you in your head.
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Aug 19, 2025
Aug 19, 2025 at 11:38 PM UTC
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"Long Khan Province, 10 July 1969.                The contact report, it stated..."   I remember Raymond K at Woodside, Sitting on the bed next to mine. He was sewing buttons on a shirt and wincing At my ***** ribald, song. It was not so much my singing (which was loud) But the stupid, foul profanity which he hated. Nowadays, I think I've changed but Ray hasn't; Ray can't, he's dead. And you will never, ever put to right that wrong, But needs must carry it forever, With you in your head.
A war casualty for whom I blame then second lieutenant…. He knows who he is.
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Aug 19, 2025
Aug 19, 2025 at 11:38 PM UTC
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