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She bloomed so beautifully Petals opening with a hope Where the light fell the hardest Though from far she would see him As long as she could. He rose, as he always did golden, distant, unaware touching a thousand lives at once never pausing long enough to notice one. She breathed for him in devotion as each ray felt like a promise That gave her warmth to stand While others bowed out And faded into shade. With hopes for him to see She endured the pain of the heat Her edges burned, and she faded Still, she faced him, innocently Not knowing how to speak loudly. And at last, she was no longer there. Who is wrong? The innocent flower that loved the sun Or the Sun who just killed the flower? Or is it the fate of the sun not knowing He was loved, and that He was her end. @kavithaprabhakaran
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Apr 7
Apr 7, 2026 at 7:41 AM UTC
who is wrong?
She bloomed so beautifully Petals opening with a hope Where the light fell the hardest Though from far she would see him As long as she could. He rose, as he always did golden, distant, unaware touching a thousand lives at once never pausing long enough to notice one. She breathed for him in devotion as each ray felt like a promise That gave her warmth to stand While others bowed out And faded into shade. With hopes for him to see She endured the pain of the heat Her edges burned, and she faded Still, she faced him, innocently Not knowing how to speak loudly. And at last, she was no longer there. Who is wrong? The innocent flower that loved the sun Or the Sun who just killed the flower? Or is it the fate of the sun not knowing He was loved, and that He was her end. @kavithaprabhakaran
KavithaPrabhakaran
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Apr 7
Apr 7, 2026 at 7:41 AM UTC
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