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today I drove up to see you not you, but the part of you thats still there I was dressed in black and for the first time the color never felt so… wrong, walking in the air smelled like roses too many roses almost family who I don’t even know surround me one starts crying and pulls me into a hug “oh Georgia!” I didn’t know this girl but I could tell I did, and she sure remembered me “I haven’t seen you since you were this tall” Her hand goes to the ground “Oh you’ve grown so beautiful” I try and smile but…I can’t everyone around me talks about how they don’t think I’d come my mom to come my grandmother to come most I haven’t seen in 10 years because my grandma had to distance herself because of her problems I look at pictures of you and your family you and your husband you and your friends and you look beautiful your smiling and I know it must’ve hurt to smile after what you’ve gone through but you were the strongest women I’ve known you fought through your husbands death through cancer through the world and you died with a smile on your face they sit and it’s so quiet I feel as if my breaths are too loud so I hold it my eyes are to wet so I close them they talk about your life how could a mother, a sister, a wife, a aunt, a great aunt, a grandmother, a stepmother, a step grandmother, a sister in law, a all the labels not know how to live how could you live in Chicago, Milwaukee, Kentucky, Washington, London, Florida Florida Florida Florida not know how to breathe and you did you did everything you were everything you taught me how to bake apple pie at 4 years old you took me to a golf place when I was younger I vaguely remember a group of 4 men were waiting so we sat on the bench my great uncle told her “don’t say anything” but by missing every hole for about 30 minutes she screams “HURRY UP ALREADY” and with her very not stable legs like the girl she is charges at them and they scramble away and you yell something that rhymes with the f “RUCK YOUUUUUUUU” you were a brave person and you never held your breath like I did you were never scared to say or do anything you were my great aunt Jeannie and you still are in peace now at least after suffering for 15 years you probably didn’t think I would come but here I am crying in a black dress sitting unable to stand you lived a long life but now it’s time to say goodbye even though you promised me you’d “live forever” we all knew that wasnt true at least someone in my life loved me and now your up in the heaven with god or what they said and maybe my religion will never match up with yours but I hope whoever or wherever you are your happy and maybe one day I’ll join you up there too in peace I love you, Georgia **
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Mar 5
Mar 5, 2026 at 9:33 PM UTC
goodbyes
today I drove up to see you not you, but the part of you thats still there I was dressed in black and for the first time the color never felt so… wrong, walking in the air smelled like roses too many roses almost family who I don’t even know surround me one starts crying and pulls me into a hug “oh Georgia!” I didn’t know this girl but I could tell I did, and she sure remembered me “I haven’t seen you since you were this tall” Her hand goes to the ground “Oh you’ve grown so beautiful” I try and smile but…I can’t everyone around me talks about how they don’t think I’d come my mom to come my grandmother to come most I haven’t seen in 10 years because my grandma had to distance herself because of her problems I look at pictures of you and your family you and your husband you and your friends and you look beautiful your smiling and I know it must’ve hurt to smile after what you’ve gone through but you were the strongest women I’ve known you fought through your husbands death through cancer through the world and you died with a smile on your face they sit and it’s so quiet I feel as if my breaths are too loud so I hold it my eyes are to wet so I close them they talk about your life how could a mother, a sister, a wife, a aunt, a great aunt, a grandmother, a stepmother, a step grandmother, a sister in law, a all the labels not know how to live how could you live in Chicago, Milwaukee, Kentucky, Washington, London, Florida Florida Florida Florida not know how to breathe and you did you did everything you were everything you taught me how to bake apple pie at 4 years old you took me to a golf place when I was younger I vaguely remember a group of 4 men were waiting so we sat on the bench my great uncle told her “don’t say anything” but by missing every hole for about 30 minutes she screams “HURRY UP ALREADY” and with her very not stable legs like the girl she is charges at them and they scramble away and you yell something that rhymes with the f “RUCK YOUUUUUUUU” you were a brave person and you never held your breath like I did you were never scared to say or do anything you were my great aunt Jeannie and you still are in peace now at least after suffering for 15 years you probably didn’t think I would come but here I am crying in a black dress sitting unable to stand you lived a long life but now it’s time to say goodbye even though you promised me you’d “live forever” we all knew that wasnt true at least someone in my life loved me and now your up in the heaven with god or what they said and maybe my religion will never match up with yours but I hope whoever or wherever you are your happy and maybe one day I’ll join you up there too in peace I love you, Georgia **
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Mar 5
Mar 5, 2026 at 9:33 PM UTC
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