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I stopped loving on that day, When I saw the wall that lay Between the vows and love’s delight, Locked in war by day and night. Love arrives and the ring departs, A wedding breaks the tender hearts. A cruel exchange, a bitter trade, A promise bent, a dream unmade. I stopped loving when I learned How joy is bought and trust is burned; It gives, it takes, yet leaves you bare, The gold is gone, the weight still there. I stopped loving, for I knew My sun and storm were theirs to choose. A fragile thread, too weak, too thin, To bind my heart, or hold me in.
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Aug 15, 2025
Aug 15, 2025 at 5:42 AM UTC
I Stopped Loving
I stopped loving on that day, When I saw the wall that lay Between the vows and love’s delight, Locked in war by day and night. Love arrives and the ring departs, A wedding breaks the tender hearts. A cruel exchange, a bitter trade, A promise bent, a dream unmade. I stopped loving when I learned How joy is bought and trust is burned; It gives, it takes, yet leaves you bare, The gold is gone, the weight still there. I stopped loving, for I knew My sun and storm were theirs to choose. A fragile thread, too weak, too thin, To bind my heart, or hold me in.
Marwan-Baytie
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56/M/Australia
Aug 15, 2025
Aug 15, 2025 at 5:42 AM UTC
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