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It happened at 4:05 PM at Jamaica Station Anticipating a LIRR connection arrival of when A woman answered questions of man The woman was totally high at her command She walked to one side of the platform The drugged up woman dropped her plastic Coke Cola bottle on the ground The woman then walked to the other side of the platform and then stepped off The next then anybody knew, she was laying flat on the tracks A multitude of commuters that pulled her up Luckily no train came Her life yet remained It is the Lord who gave her another chance God had mercy so she could continue in advance Fate could have been death But the message states, “There is still life left” Walking unknown This is what life has shown The woman has a drug crave
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Jul 23, 2014
Jul 23, 2014 at 3:52 AM UTC
THE DARK HAZE OF NEAR DEATH (TRUE STORY)
It happened at 4:05 PM at Jamaica Station Anticipating a LIRR connection arrival of when A woman answered questions of man The woman was totally high at her command She walked to one side of the platform The drugged up woman dropped her plastic Coke Cola bottle on the ground The woman then walked to the other side of the platform and then stepped off The next then anybody knew, she was laying flat on the tracks A multitude of commuters that pulled her up Luckily no train came Her life yet remained It is the Lord who gave her another chance God had mercy so she could continue in advance Fate could have been death But the message states, “There is still life left” Walking unknown This is what life has shown The woman has a drug crave
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Jul 23, 2014
Jul 23, 2014 at 3:52 AM UTC
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