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They what? said Gran they said we weren’t to run around the rain shelter you replied did they now? Well if you want to run around the rain shelter my dears you run around and up Gran got and trotted around to the couple on the other side of the circular rain shelter and words were said and niceties exchanged and the couple got up and left but Granddad had sat where he was staring out at the grey mist over the sea the exchanging of niceties was not for him he preferred the colour of the seaside town flowers in a nearby bed or the smell of the salty sea and when you and your sister and Gran returned to where he was sitting he said Sorted it then and Gran said Of course and Granddad said Good and looked at the white hair of his wife and the grey/blue eyes that stared fixedly at him and her plump short stature and added I knew you’d see them off you’ve got more bite than the bleeding dog at home and Gran laughed and you and your sister went off to run around the rain shelter the grey mist distorting the sea and deserted beach but not the sound of gulls or sea rushing on the shore or of Gran standing in front of the couple hands on hips a string of words and angry sounds coming from her lips.
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Jun 11, 2012
Jun 11, 2012 at 2:10 AM UTC
EXCHANGE OF NICETIES.
They what? said Gran they said we weren’t to run around the rain shelter you replied did they now? Well if you want to run around the rain shelter my dears you run around and up Gran got and trotted around to the couple on the other side of the circular rain shelter and words were said and niceties exchanged and the couple got up and left but Granddad had sat where he was staring out at the grey mist over the sea the exchanging of niceties was not for him he preferred the colour of the seaside town flowers in a nearby bed or the smell of the salty sea and when you and your sister and Gran returned to where he was sitting he said Sorted it then and Gran said Of course and Granddad said Good and looked at the white hair of his wife and the grey/blue eyes that stared fixedly at him and her plump short stature and added I knew you’d see them off you’ve got more bite than the bleeding dog at home and Gran laughed and you and your sister went off to run around the rain shelter the grey mist distorting the sea and deserted beach but not the sound of gulls or sea rushing on the shore or of Gran standing in front of the couple hands on hips a string of words and angry sounds coming from her lips.
terry-collett
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Jun 11, 2012
Jun 11, 2012 at 2:10 AM UTC
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