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many ( if not most )
Of our poems are written to
A ...... You
More properly spelled
Y
O
U
rising up as the ******* symbol that it is
/::/
By addressing the poem to this
Y
O
U
The real audience ( the actual readers )
Are effectively erased from the writer's consideration
And all responsibility for the poem is likewise erased
•
Y
O
U
as the subject matter
Totally de-personalizes the person who is the subject
Of the poem and renders him as a mere object
( phallus )
In the writer's mind
•
This enables the writer to invent any SELF desired
The usual SELF is of
THE VICTIM
category
//
This VICTIM status
Has been raised to a religious level
As
THE BROKEN PEOPLE
have replaced
THE CHOSEN PEOPLE
as the god given identification for mankind
•
With its ritual mutilations
( real or fake )
Commanding its ritual amens
And commiserations
///
be wary
DEAR YOUNG ONES
and try to write real poetry
For it can heal both you and the world
Apr 23, 2015
Apr 23, 2015 at 4:17 PM UTC
)(
/\
( • )
/\
___
many ( if not most )
Of our poems are written to
A ...... You
More properly spelled
Y
O
U
rising up as the ******* symbol that it is
/::/
By addressing the poem to this
Y
O
U
The real audience ( the actual readers )
Are effectively erased from the writer's consideration
And all responsibility for the poem is likewise erased
•
Y
O
U
as the subject matter
Totally de-personalizes the person who is the subject
Of the poem and renders him as a mere object
( phallus )
In the writer's mind
•
This enables the writer to invent any SELF desired
The usual SELF is of
THE VICTIM
category
//
This VICTIM status
Has been raised to a religious level
As
THE BROKEN PEOPLE
have replaced
THE CHOSEN PEOPLE
as the god given identification for mankind
•
With its ritual mutilations
( real or fake )
Commanding its ritual amens
And commiserations
///
be wary
DEAR YOUNG ONES
and try to write real poetry
For it can heal both you and the world