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Your love is an ocean and I am drowning. Saltwater stings my eyes and burns my throat as I desperately cry my S.O.S. You pull me down in waves, my lungs aching for air. Who knew it would be you who has me struggling to breathe? The water somehow calms me with its silence. I find solace in your murky depts. An introverts daydream all alone in 145 million square miles of torrential rain only to share my final moments with the sea. I sink deeper and deeper I stop fighting and let go. For a moment I may not be breathing. The pressure against my chest is undeniable. I open my mouth to breathe but I only chock on saltwater. My lungs fill with tears. I swear I hear a voice, be it my oxygen suffocated mind or you whispering to me. You break the ominous silence with seven simple words; "Some love is to strong to fight" and with that I close my eyes and        give                in                    to                       you.
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Jun 23, 2014
Jun 23, 2014 at 2:30 PM UTC
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Your love is an ocean and I am drowning. Saltwater stings my eyes and burns my throat as I desperately cry my S.O.S. You pull me down in waves, my lungs aching for air. Who knew it would be you who has me struggling to breathe? The water somehow calms me with its silence. I find solace in your murky depts. An introverts daydream all alone in 145 million square miles of torrential rain only to share my final moments with the sea. I sink deeper and deeper I stop fighting and let go. For a moment I may not be breathing. The pressure against my chest is undeniable. I open my mouth to breathe but I only chock on saltwater. My lungs fill with tears. I swear I hear a voice, be it my oxygen suffocated mind or you whispering to me. You break the ominous silence with seven simple words; "Some love is to strong to fight" and with that I close my eyes and        give                in                    to                       you.
nicole-singleton
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Jun 23, 2014
Jun 23, 2014 at 2:30 PM UTC
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