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a few suggestions for the universe (and a poem for you)

what i don't understand is how you

can't hear my heartbeat from where you are,

can't feel my laughter,

can't see my love,

what i don't understand is how you

can't feel the way i feel about you.

i don't understand how it can be overlooked by

anyone, especially you,

the way my heart leaps

(out of my chest)

my eyes shine

(out of my head)

my breath stops

(out of my mind

for you).

what i don't understand is how

one person can love someone so much

how one person can be so oblivious to it -

shouldn't there be some

cosmic rule

that hearts don't love alone?

there's not, i know

(and

i would know)

but there should be because the

loneliness is eating me alive, the

want is eating me dead, the

hope is filling me to my absolute brim,

and all of it

all of it

all of it, for you.

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maddie-3
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Mar 17, 2012
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