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you looked out onto the lands, god had made for you. it was too cold. too damp. you said "i'll do you one better" and when the structure was finished, you lifted your calloused hands in praise to the creator above. Unaware that he stood 50 yards away, wondering: "who the **** ruined my masterpiece?"
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Sep 21, 2014
Sep 21, 2014 at 11:57 PM UTC
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you looked out onto the lands, god had made for you. it was too cold. too damp. you said "i'll do you one better" and when the structure was finished, you lifted your calloused hands in praise to the creator above. Unaware that he stood 50 yards away, wondering: "who the **** ruined my masterpiece?"
will-jolly
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Sep 21, 2014
Sep 21, 2014 at 11:57 PM UTC
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