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I look in admiration at someone who doesn't even give me a second glance who can't separate themselves from their own selfish ways for long enough to see what's in front of their god **** eyes So how many times do I have to give you a second chance? At love! At life! At happiness.... My problems may be untold but at least I bring them to the surface every so often so we don't have to be separated by any more distance now we... we can't be told how to make this work we can't be told to make ourselves a commodity and let everyone around look in empathy and watch as this tears us apart right through our seems
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Feb 22, 2014
Feb 22, 2014 at 10:24 PM UTC
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I look in admiration at someone who doesn't even give me a second glance who can't separate themselves from their own selfish ways for long enough to see what's in front of their god **** eyes So how many times do I have to give you a second chance? At love! At life! At happiness.... My problems may be untold but at least I bring them to the surface every so often so we don't have to be separated by any more distance now we... we can't be told how to make this work we can't be told to make ourselves a commodity and let everyone around look in empathy and watch as this tears us apart right through our seems
Shes still hurt. I'm not helping much, am I?
joseph-cleveland
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Feb 22, 2014
Feb 22, 2014 at 10:24 PM UTC
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