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A woman’s touch. Yet to another woman applied, towelling dry, older, hands slightly more worn, eyeing the young woman, secretly wishing. The young woman, naked except the pink bow in brown hair, thinking of something other, not sensing anything of the woman drying, the touch, the towel, is far from her thoughts, maybe some boyfriend and his recent deeds or words or both. The bath had been refreshing, the water just right, the older woman always has it so, the towel laid out, the soap prepared, washing the back, places she cannot reach. The older woman seems to take her time, drying each area of skin with some daintiness, a delicate touch, wanting more maybe or nothing very much. The younger woman, feeling dryer, more in touch with self, thoughts ordered into place, takes no notice of the other woman’s rub of ******* or under arms, no thought of hers at all, no grace, no charms, the recent boyfriend, he who made to her such passionate entering and kissings, she feels like a fatted calf, some well stuff bird, pleased with her self, her sense of need fulfilled, the pleasure dome having been reached and done. The older woman drying now the thighs has no wish to end her task, no other love or want, except what’s there before her eyes.
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Apr 25, 2013
Apr 25, 2013 at 2:42 AM UTC
A WOMAN'S TOUCH.
A woman’s touch. Yet to another woman applied, towelling dry, older, hands slightly more worn, eyeing the young woman, secretly wishing. The young woman, naked except the pink bow in brown hair, thinking of something other, not sensing anything of the woman drying, the touch, the towel, is far from her thoughts, maybe some boyfriend and his recent deeds or words or both. The bath had been refreshing, the water just right, the older woman always has it so, the towel laid out, the soap prepared, washing the back, places she cannot reach. The older woman seems to take her time, drying each area of skin with some daintiness, a delicate touch, wanting more maybe or nothing very much. The younger woman, feeling dryer, more in touch with self, thoughts ordered into place, takes no notice of the other woman’s rub of ******* or under arms, no thought of hers at all, no grace, no charms, the recent boyfriend, he who made to her such passionate entering and kissings, she feels like a fatted calf, some well stuff bird, pleased with her self, her sense of need fulfilled, the pleasure dome having been reached and done. The older woman drying now the thighs has no wish to end her task, no other love or want, except what’s there before her eyes.
terry-collett
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Apr 25, 2013
Apr 25, 2013 at 2:42 AM UTC
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