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How pretentious are we This preternatural attraction Magnetizes you and I, like gravity It's surprising that we never rise Still I recall the first time that you fell We held hands and laughed While centuries have come and gone You said, what's past is past But what's past has yet to pass away So we pretend that nothing’s changed While for thousand of years We like to pretend we've remained the same There was a time when all writing Was considered a manifestation of the divine And now it seems like anyone can write copy And it makes me wonder out loud Is it only grammar that appeals to you   Is it syntax that takes you to heaven Are you aroused by proper punctuation Its frightening to know what turns people on these days And I am alarmed at the lack of literacy portrayed Yet a common mistake is to assume its due to ignorance And not a lack of virtue, that keeps it all this way
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Sep 4, 2019
Sep 4, 2019 at 4:49 PM UTC
loss of psyche (eros fallacy)
How pretentious are we This preternatural attraction Magnetizes you and I, like gravity It's surprising that we never rise Still I recall the first time that you fell We held hands and laughed While centuries have come and gone You said, what's past is past But what's past has yet to pass away So we pretend that nothing’s changed While for thousand of years We like to pretend we've remained the same There was a time when all writing Was considered a manifestation of the divine And now it seems like anyone can write copy And it makes me wonder out loud Is it only grammar that appeals to you   Is it syntax that takes you to heaven Are you aroused by proper punctuation Its frightening to know what turns people on these days And I am alarmed at the lack of literacy portrayed Yet a common mistake is to assume its due to ignorance And not a lack of virtue, that keeps it all this way
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Sep 4, 2019
Sep 4, 2019 at 4:49 PM UTC
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