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why does it feel weird to say: zune, computer, video game, in my poems? they’re normal for my age for my time and yet I feel like I’m corrupting a poem when I throw those wicked words in I can mention the tv, the phone, the car, but not the plasma tv the cell phone the hover car this feeling of betrayal to something that has no feelings is messing with me and yet I don’t fight it so for now, sub-woofer, iPad, E-reader you’re not going to appear on my page but probably one day you will and they’ll be some other thing that I feel defiles my poetry
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Oct 29, 2010
Oct 29, 2010 at 1:08 PM UTC
techno-babble
why does it feel weird to say: zune, computer, video game, in my poems? they’re normal for my age for my time and yet I feel like I’m corrupting a poem when I throw those wicked words in I can mention the tv, the phone, the car, but not the plasma tv the cell phone the hover car this feeling of betrayal to something that has no feelings is messing with me and yet I don’t fight it so for now, sub-woofer, iPad, E-reader you’re not going to appear on my page but probably one day you will and they’ll be some other thing that I feel defiles my poetry
wave-break
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Oct 29, 2010
Oct 29, 2010 at 1:08 PM UTC
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