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What is love? You ask me as the first breath of frost whispers goodbye on your lips. I feel quite strongly that life’s immensity hangs in the summer breeze; particles of dust that glimmer in the sun behind your heels. They say that our atoms are spread thin like a crisp sheet that catches the wind and settles fragrantly / deep inside my mind But the universe is in your eyes as dense as a black hole and as light as the sky; fields of wheat stirring in the evening sun as I taste life everywhere soaking into my bones. Your innocent breath, unfolding itself gently . wholly melting light into my cold skin. time is folding spherically O folding infinitely/boundless or floating selflessly through empty space together
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Jun 6, 2015
Jun 6, 2015 at 12:06 PM UTC
Love is freedom
What is love? You ask me as the first breath of frost whispers goodbye on your lips. I feel quite strongly that life’s immensity hangs in the summer breeze; particles of dust that glimmer in the sun behind your heels. They say that our atoms are spread thin like a crisp sheet that catches the wind and settles fragrantly / deep inside my mind But the universe is in your eyes as dense as a black hole and as light as the sky; fields of wheat stirring in the evening sun as I taste life everywhere soaking into my bones. Your innocent breath, unfolding itself gently . wholly melting light into my cold skin. time is folding spherically O folding infinitely/boundless or floating selflessly through empty space together
catriona-e
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Jun 6, 2015
Jun 6, 2015 at 12:06 PM UTC
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