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11:53 PM Seven minutes left… To return to a place I never wanted to discover. 11:54 PM The garden… Where flowers once laughed, Bushes swayed in joy, And trees whispered giggles, Ruling a world of shadows. But for me, That garden is the way To pluck white roses For your soul. 11:56 PM The letter you gave, I found it on that bench— Now soaked, Drenched in my tears. 11:57 PM The cookies I baked for you, Rotten with betrayal, Poisoned by the love we lost. And the cruelest part— I ate every last one. 11:58 PM You promised me You’d never make me shed a tear, Yet here I am, Drowning in a vision Of you. 11:59 PM Wake up. Even if it’s midnight, For once, Pat my head, Whisper in my ear: “Who said I am gone? I’m here, babe.” 12:00 AM I just want you to know— I love you, And always will. Happy Anniversary. ~BLUE HOUR
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Mar 11
Mar 11, 2026 at 10:01 AM UTC
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11:53 PM Seven minutes left… To return to a place I never wanted to discover. 11:54 PM The garden… Where flowers once laughed, Bushes swayed in joy, And trees whispered giggles, Ruling a world of shadows. But for me, That garden is the way To pluck white roses For your soul. 11:56 PM The letter you gave, I found it on that bench— Now soaked, Drenched in my tears. 11:57 PM The cookies I baked for you, Rotten with betrayal, Poisoned by the love we lost. And the cruelest part— I ate every last one. 11:58 PM You promised me You’d never make me shed a tear, Yet here I am, Drowning in a vision Of you. 11:59 PM Wake up. Even if it’s midnight, For once, Pat my head, Whisper in my ear: “Who said I am gone? I’m here, babe.” 12:00 AM I just want you to know— I love you, And always will. Happy Anniversary. ~BLUE HOUR
Thanks for the love of my poem "He was mute she was blind". I am glad you all supported it and loved it so much, this is another poem of mine 12:00 am fun fact about this is not a poem from a thought it is a poem I get a dream off to write about so I hope you will like it thank you and enjoy :)
Bluehour
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Mar 11
Mar 11, 2026 at 10:01 AM UTC
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