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I thought you were everything a man of greatness is what I thought you were but then as time passed by flaws and conflicts emerged the sweetness and adoration you gave turned to pain and hate the lies you spout the promises you broke the pain you gave it haunts me til this day the man I once looked up is now below me unmoving, cold and gone gone to a somewhere far away from here leaving all the pain behind no apology, no closure just bitterness, smoke and ashes
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Jul 17, 2020
Jul 17, 2020 at 10:04 PM UTC
bitterness, smoke and ashes
I thought you were everything a man of greatness is what I thought you were but then as time passed by flaws and conflicts emerged the sweetness and adoration you gave turned to pain and hate the lies you spout the promises you broke the pain you gave it haunts me til this day the man I once looked up is now below me unmoving, cold and gone gone to a somewhere far away from here leaving all the pain behind no apology, no closure just bitterness, smoke and ashes
bruce-gil
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Jul 17, 2020
Jul 17, 2020 at 10:04 PM UTC
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